rough cut

At the start of our film noir, the music being very slow fits the situation however as the film carries on it would work and sound much better if the music got increasingly faster; building suspense up to the shooting. Hopefully we can change the music slightly to give a better effect before our final cut has to be published.

When the logo of our film company and the title of our sequence appears they happen to fast for you to register what they say properly, therefore we aim to make the clips last longer during our final cut.

When the detectives are looking down at the body it would sound better if there was a slow tune, mainly by piano, playing in the background to express the emotion of somebody dying.

We also need to film a few more short parts to finish the film completely in order to hand in the final cut.

The good parts

The editing of the film up to now is really good. We think that the use of changing the colour of the filming and showing the man walking from all different angles, even from the stalkers point of view, works really well.

Adding music helps to create suspense and show emotion.